小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com35分写作规范练(八)写作(共两节,满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。[2019·湖南岳阳市质检二]Oneday,mylittlebrotherboughtanicecreaminthestreet,enjoyingtoeatingit.Unexpected,hesawhisfriendcomingtowardhim,sohehurriedlyhidtheicecreamsbehindhim.Afterhegreetedhisfriend,theybegintotalk.Hisfriendhadthedogwithhim.Whenhestoppedtotalkwithhisbrother,hisdogmovedaround.Thedogwassuchgladtofindtheicecreaminmybrother'shandanditbegantoeatitwithgreaterpleasure.Mybrotherfeltembarrassedthathehadn'tsharedtheicecreamforhisfriend,hegavetheicecreamtothedog.Thenheboughtanothertwoforhisfriendandhimself.答案与解析:Oneday,mylittlebrotherboughtanicecreaminthestreet,enjoyingeatingit.Unexpected,hesawhisfriendcomingtowardhim,sohehurriedlyhidtheicecreamsbehindhim.Afterhegreetedhisfriend,theybegintotalk.Hisfriendhadthedogwithhim.Whenhestoppedtotalkwithhisbrother,hisdogmovedaround.Thedogwassuchgladtofindtheicecreaminmybrother'shandanditbegantoeatitwithgreaterpleasure.Mybrotherfeltembarrassedthathehadn'tsharedtheicecreamforhisfriend,∧hegavetheicecreamtothedog.Thenheboughtanothertwoforhisfriendandhimself.①删除toenjoy为及物动词,其后直接接宾语,enjoydoingsth.为固定搭配,意为“喜欢做某事;享受做某事”,此处to多余,故删除to。②Unexpected改为Unexpectedly此处在句中作状语,修饰整个句子,应用副词,故将Unexpected改为Unexpectedly。注意首字母大写。③creams改为cream根据语境可知,此处特指刚才买的那一个冰激凌,应用单数形式,故将creams改为cream。④begin改为began根据本句的时间状语Afterhegreetedhisfriend可知,此处表示发生在过去的动作,应用一般过去时,故将begin改为began。⑤the改为a根据语境可知,朋友身边带着一条狗,此处是第小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com一次提及,应用不定冠词修饰,且dog的发音以辅音音素开头,故将the改为a。⑥his改为my根据上文中的mylittlebrother可知,此处指“我的”弟弟,故将his改为my。⑦such改为so此处glad为形容词,应该用副词来修饰,而such修饰名词,so为副词,修饰形容词,故将such改为so。⑧greater改为great根据上下文可知,此处无比较意义,应用形容词原级,故将greater改为great。⑨for改为withsharesth.withsb.为固定搭配,意为“与某人分享某物”,故将for改为with。⑩在he前加so/andMybrotherfeltembarrassedthathehadn'tsharedtheicecream...和hegavetheicecreamtothedog都是完整的句子,两个句子之间缺少连词;根据语境可知,弟弟因为没有与他的朋友分享冰激凌而感到很尴尬,所以/然后他把那个冰激凌给了朋友的狗。此处前后分句之间为因果关系或顺承关系,故在he前加so/and。第二节书面表达(满分25分)[2019·大连一模]假定你是李华,五月份要去美国参加“国际文化周”,你的美国笔友Tom来信询问你赴美相关事宜。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:1.活动时间、地点;2.活动目的、内容;3.其他个人安排。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:InternationalCultureWeek国际文化周参考范文:DearTom,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletter.Totellthetruth,I'mgoingtoAmericatotakepartintheInternationalCultureWeek,whichisscheduledtobeheldinNewYorkthisMay.Aimingtopromoteculturalexchangeamongdifferentcountries,thecommitteeofInternationalCultureWeekhasplannedplentyofexcitingactivities,suchasvariousexhibitions,academiclecturesandmusicshows.Iwouldliketohavesomecitysightseeingwithyourcompany,ifyouareavailableduringthatperiodoftime.Ihavepreparedasurprisegiftforyou.I'mlookingforwardtoseeingyou.yours,LiHua小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com