小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com35分写作规范练(四)写作(共两节,满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。[2019·临川联考]Inordertoencouragetheseniorstotakeexerciseandrelaxthem,wearegoingtoorganizeamountainclimbingactivityinApril10.Weweretogatherattheschoolgateandstartat7:20a.m.bybusandgetbackat7:00p.m.We'llclimbHuangshanMountaininthemorning,onwhichtopwe'llhaveapicnicatthenoon.Intheafternoonwe'llbedividedintogroupandhaveafreetime.Remembertakephotosandmakenotesforthephotoexhibitionortheessaycontesttobeheldlateatourschool.Besides,takingyourlunchanddrinkingwaterwithyou.Unlessyouwanttojoin,pleasecometoStudents'UnionandsignupbeforeApril5.答案与解析:Inordertoencouragetheseniorstotakeexerciseandrelaxthem,wearegoingtoorganizeamountainclimbingactivityinApril10.Weweretogatherattheschoolgateandstartat7:20a.m.bybusandgetbackat7:00p.m.We'llclimbHuangshanMountaininthemorning,onwhichtopwe'llhaveapicnicatnoon.Intheafternoonwe'llbedividedintogroupandhaveafreetime.Remember∧takephotosandmakenotesforthephotoexhibitionortheessaycontesttobeheldlateatourschool.Besides,takingyourlunchanddrinkingwaterwithyou.Unlessyouwanttojoin,pleasecometoStudents'UnionandsignupbeforeApril5.①them改为themselves此处relax的动作发出者,即其逻辑主语theseniors与其宾语为同一对象,应用反身代词作relax的宾语,故将them改为themselves。②in改为on具体某一天前用介词on,故将in改为on。③were改为are全文主体时态为一般时态,因此此处应用一般现在时表示将来意义,故将were改为are。④which改为whose此处为非限制性定语从句,引导词作top的定语,表示所属关系,应用whose,故将which改为whose。⑤删除第二个theatnoon为固定短语,意为“在正午”,中间不用定冠词,故删除第二个the。小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com⑥group改为groups根据语境可知,此处表示“我们被分成几个组”,group为可数名词,此处应用复数形式,故将group改为groups。⑦在Remember后加toremembertodosth.为固定用法,意为“记得要做某事”,故在Remember后加to。⑧late改为later此处指之后在“我们”学校举办的照片展或者散文大赛。late意为“晚,迟”,later意为“后来;随后”,故将late改为later。⑨taking改为take根据上文的“Remember...andmakenotesfor...”可知,此处也是一个祈使句,应用动词原形开头,故将taking改为take。⑩Unless改为If句意为:如果你想加入,请于4月5日前来学生会报名。unless意为“除非”,if意为“如果”,此处应用if引导条件状语从句,故将Unless改为If。第二节书面表达(满分25分)[2019·南昌二模]假定你是李华,你和几个朋友打算去参观茶园,想邀请美国交流生Henry同往。请你给他写一封邮件告知其活动安排。内容包括:1.时间和地点;2.学习如何沏茶、品茶;3.介绍中国茶文化的历史和发展。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearHenry,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua参考范文:Dear_Henry,SomeofmyfriendsandIplantopayavisittotheteagardennearourschoolthisSunday.I'velearnedthatyouareinterestedinChineseteaculture,andIwonderifyoucouldjoinus.IthinkitwillbeanenjoyableexperienceforyoutolearnsomethingaboutthehistoryanddevelopmentofChineseteaculturethere.AndIbetyouwillbeimpressedbythetraditionalcraftsmanshipofmakingtea,whichincludeswashingtheteapots,addingtealeaves,andpouringwaterintothecups.Andthenyoucouldtastetheteamadebyyourself.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Withbestwishes!Yours,Li_Hua小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com