小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com专项技能保分练(二十三)短文改错Test1[2019·成都第二次诊断]Lastyear,myfriendandIwenttovisittheYellowMountain.Wecarriedtwobackpacks,thatturnedouttobeprettyheavierforthehike.Iamnotanexperiencinghikerandthoseendlessstepsmakemewanttoreturntothesafeandcomfortableground.Butmyfriendencouragedmegreat.“Look,thetopiscomingcloserandcloser.Wearealmostthere.”Ipulledmetogetherandkeptgoing.Afterthree-hourexhaustinghiketothetop,butwithwonderfulsceneriesontheway,wegottothetopfinally.Forourpleasure,wealsofoundahotelthatlookedverymuchinviting.答案与解析：Lastyear,myfriendandIwenttovisittheYellowMountain.Wecarriedtwobackpacks,thatturnedouttobeprettyheavierforthehike.Iamnotanexperiencinghikerandthoseendlessstepsmakemewanttoreturntothesafeandcomfortableground.Butmyfriendencouragedmegreat.“Look,thetopiscomingcloserandcloser.Wearealmostthere.”Ipulledmetogetherandkeptgoing.After∧threehourexhaustinghiketothetop,butwithwonderfulsceneriesontheway,wegottothetopfinally.Forourpleasure,wealsofoundahotelthatlookedveryinviting.①that改为which考查定语从句。分析句子结构可知，此处是一个定语从句，先行词是backpacks，应用which引导该非限制性定语从句，在从句中作主语。②heavier改为heavy考查形容词。分析句子结构可知，此处pretty是副词，相当于very，并没有比较的含义，故用形容词原级即可。故将heavier改为heavy。③experiencing改为experienced考查形容词。根据句意可知，此处表示“我不是一个经验丰富的远足者”，应用experienced“经验丰富的，有经验的”，experiencing没有这个意思。④make改为made考查动词的时态。与上文中的“Lastyear”呼应可知，事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。⑤great改为greatly考查副词。一般用副词修饰动词，在句子中作状语，故用greatly修饰动词“encouraged”。⑥me改为myself考查反身代词。与句子的主语I呼应可知，此处应用I的反身代词myself作动词pull的宾语，表示“使自己振作起来”。⑦After后加a考查冠词。hike是可数名词，被“threehourexhausting”修饰，表示“一次三个小时的令人筋疲力尽的远足”，且threehour的发音以辅音音素开头，故用不定冠词a修饰。⑧sceneries改为scenery考查名词。scenery是不可数名词，没有复数形式。小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com小学、初中、高中各种试卷真题知识归纳文案合同PPT等免费下载www.doc985.com⑨For改为To考查固定搭配。表示“令某人快乐的是”应用toone'spleasure，介词to在此表示“某事发生时某人的反应”。⑩删除much考查副词。very是副词，可修饰形容词，在句子中作状语，而much是副词，一般修饰形容词的比较级，此处修饰形容词inviting应用副词very，故删除much。Test2[2019·河南五校联考]DearDaniel，I'mreallydelightedtolearnthatyouhavewonfirstprizeinyourschool'sChineseTraditionalCultureQuizlastweek.I'mwritingtoofferyourcongratulationstoyoufromthebottomsofmyheart.IknowthatyouhavealwaysbeinginterestedinChinesetraditionalculturesinceyoucamefromChina.LearningChineseisnoteasyforyou,andyoukeeponstudyingithard.Nowyoureffortshavepaidoff.Thereisyourhardworkthatleadsyoutosoagreatsuccess.I'msureyouwillachieveanevengreatsuccessinyourfuturestudies.WishyouhappystayinChina!Yours，LiHua答案与解析：DearDaniel，I'mreallydelightedtolearnthatyouwonfirstprizeinyourschool'sChineseTraditionalCultureQuizlastweek.I'mwritingtoofferyourcongratulationstoyoufromthebottomsofmyheart.IknowthatyouhavealwaysbeinginterestedinChinesetraditionalculturesinceyoucamefromChina.LearningChineseisnoteasyforyou,andyoukeeponstudyingithard.Nowyoureffortshavepaidoff....
